Wednesday, February 4, 2015

Line animation critique

Overall I got very positive feedback with how much effort I put into my work.  It didn't feel like 15 seconds because I put an actual narrative into it.  Honestly the only critical feedback I got was that towards the end when the sticks are fighting, the emotion seems to switch more towards anger and I completely agree.  I think in order to fix this I'll have to have the stick just run away from the other one rather than smash it.

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